Feedback i received from Lorenzo and Joe Gilmore.
Level of analysis - Room for improvement, too many observations not enough objectives.
Organisation of material - Good, clear, well and organised.
Clarity of delivery - Good presentation which gained in confidence. Could speak louder.
Personal Reflection - You need to identify more context.
Additional feedback;
The ideas are there but promotion, production and market context al need to be clearly considered and understood to give credibility to the work.
Need to deliver more expression, enthusiasm and drive.
